week six problem

Fair Choclate

WALT  this week we have  learn about fair choclate

My first pay packet

Show not tell

Show she was so sad when she lost her puppy

Tell: When she lost her puppy “Leonidas” early in the morning she was so sad that the heat was melting her broken heart. Without her puppy, coldness she was melted into pieces so Leonidas looked like yellow rough candy floss, with the chance of black licorice with the yellow rough candy floss, his eyes were red enough to fill the strawberry taste in his tongue with sadness. 


So

What happen was “mum” made a delivery of a scrumptious cake ever made so it was 10 layers of strawberry and chocolate with a hint of vanilla icing making it a neapolitan cake, So when she ate the cake her heart reformed with loveness.

Marcus Thomas the new Zealand caveman

The hunted evil ride

	T	Hunted evill ride
	O	One sunny hot day Shaun was going to the theme park in the morning he was bulky like a Gorilla and Mini,Me well he was like as tall like a Baby Bear but he was fast like you you never seen him we're excited because there was a roller coaster. But the thing about this ride the rail will wiggle and it felt like it was about to collapse but because it was an old ride so what do you inspect “Let's go” So we're on the ride here we go!!! were going up down trul trul and a big circle and the strange thing when we got off they saw a ghost that was flying in the air I quickly ran home.
	P	Shaun Forgot Mini,Me and now Mini,Me all alone Wait he’s not a alone
	S	Shaun tell mum That Mini,Me alone and pick up Mini,Me at the theme park

My Blog Post About math

We learned about statistics and keep of mind of we learn about words and analysing data and how to explain it and how to ruler our books and how to draw.